EBOOK/PDF [The Decay]

The Craving gFrankly this deserves 2 stars Not because the writing sucks because the formatting andrammar leave a lot to be desired I rare Pretty The Murder Exchange goodPrettyoodlooking forward to book 2 well written however I could have done without the Edwin side story it didn t really add anything The description in the book blurb does not relate much to what happens in the first half of this book which is as far as I went with it I was under the impression that this book is about an everyday man trying to look after his family in the aftermath of a nuclear blast Firstly Paul was not driving when he saw the mushroom cloud he was being kidnapped by Love in Catalina Cove (Catalina Cove gangsters not mentioned in the blurb The first half of the book introduces the most uninspiring side stories which were of little interest and added nothing to the story Paul works in an electrical repair shop and is managing the shop while his boss Bill looks after his cancer striken wife Suddenly Paul is approached by shadyangster The Million Dollar Goal guys who want to find Bill and have been unable to reach him by phone or at his house So theseuys decide to stalk Paul through town and then try to abduct him in the middle of a shopping Centre Car Park Just car park just the nuclear blast on the horizon Why What use is Paul oing to be in finding Bill How is kidnapping him and taking him to whoever wants Bill of any possible use Bill How is kidnapping him and taking him to whoever wants Bill of any possible use these idiot men can t recognise a mushroom cloud And they decide to just murder some shopper and let Paul escape What is the POINT of all this rubbishSecond dumb side story is that while this Is Going On His going on his s daughter is inside the shop when a roup of armed thugs carry out a pre planned attack to rob the place This is occuring as the shop manager is trying to et everyone out because of the nuclear blast Despite the silly cow realising tha. A nearby nuclear attack rocks a small town in Pennsylvania sending one man and his step daughter on a perilous journey of survival It was a normal Friday afternoon shattered after an unexpected terrorist attack on the New York Stock Exchange While the country focuses on the shocking aftermath of the Wall Street bombing they lose communications cell phones Internet and ele. ,
The Decay

Roger Hayden ☆ 2 Review

N a ang of 20 thugs a nuclear blast and an attack on the stock market all The Decay reviewThe Decay is the first short post apocalyptic survival book after attack on the stock market all The Decay reviewThe Decay is the first short post apocalyptic survival book after nuclear detonations in this series written by author Roger Hayden I really wanted to ive this book a higher rating because the basic plot line is ood In fact as others have stated this short read part 1 of a 2 part story could be worked into a really The Unlikeliest Hero: The Story of Desmond T. Doss good full length post apocalypse novel if the characters were developed further However there were flaws that prevented me fromiving than 2 stars First and foremost were the many rammatical and word usage errors eg and foremost were the many rammatical and word usage errors eg of wrong tenses it s vs its rown vs round rouge vs rogue fowl vs foul They occurred so freuently that they were very distracting Add to that a number of passages that were so over the top in the overuse of imagery that I almost Prisoner of Midnight gave up The author really needs to use aood proof reader It wasn t a terrible story It was free and a uick read So it had that oing for it BUT between spelling errors don t authors have editors and proofreaders and the author not knowing the difference between dawn and dusk really Oh and the entire first chapter never even hinted atmentioned again so it was pointless Unless it comes back in part 2 although I doubt it Nahit could have been a ood solid story but no I wouldn t suggest it This 121 page novella was a Confessions of an Air Ambulance Doctor good starting point to what can become areat story Hopefully the Edwinblue car episode will be explained later in series The Decay is a post apocalyptic story caused By Nuclear Bombs And I nuclear bombs and I ready to Mr. Jelly's Business get started on 2nd part of the story I do not see any reason toet all upset over the formatting just turn the page and keep reading There were a few misspelled words as well BUT it was free and a fast rea. This Paul has one thing on his mind protect his step daughter Julie and 6 1/2 Body Parts (Body Movers, get to his wife Samantha who is out of town on business Through his journey however they will find that sometimes the stakes are just too high Don’t miss the first installment of the exciting new dystopian science fiction thriller destined to bring you into a strange new world of apocalyptic vision. T theseuys are up to no Gökyüzü Mavi Kaldı good and acting suspicious does Julie exit the building to find Paul No she hangs about in the ueue thinking about trying to buy make up and doing nothing until sheets trapped inside and the amazing Paul evades his armed attackers ets past the thugs and rescues her Hurrah Jeez Meanwhile nobody seems to be interested in the nuclear bomb that has went off which was the supposed plot of the story And how does the nuclear attack fit in with the bombing at the start of the book Are they related or not Can we Kind Of Deal With These of deal with these I wasn T Interested In Idiot interested in the idiot story or the thugsI wanted a nice apocalypse story and there was no sign of it halfway through and I had lost interest in waiting to see if anything was oing to happen with it Very disappointing A free book for Kindle Easy young adult level reading with slightly mature content level This like many other stories online is only part of the story This one ends at a The Sun Shines Over the Sanggan River good spot anyway There s a lotoing on in this book and little is solved by the time this ends Still not sure where the THIEME Atlas of Anatomy: Head and Neuroanatomy gangsters come into thisIn any case the characters are ok but not developed well Not that there was much time A bit 2 dimensionalI d like to see where this storyoes but not sure how much I d be willing pay for it This was a really ood novel and I know it was only the first part of a 2 part set this first part was an incredibly uick read Actually this was real enough feeling that it could have been a much in depth book a much epic novel with back story and details added in about characters and situations As it was I felt it was rushed but still a ood read I ll make sure to add part 2 to my list Needs an editor and a muse Too many things happening in too small a window When two mob hitme. Ctricity as a result of the nation’s downed power River Bodies (Northampton County, grids Paul Hayden is a thirty five year old man who just wants to pick up his step daughter from school ando home while avoiding the busy afternoon traffic While driving he notices a mushroom cloud in the distance The bright radiance of the sky sends the townspeople into a panic and mass soon evacuation follows Through. ,